Okay! I basically spent my whole sick day painting and I finished January concentration piece number two! Only12 hours late! Just a reminder, my concentration is the abstract representation of movement:
oh my gosh this is so cool! you can tell exactly what it is even though it is still completely abstract. I like the color scheme of this. It is muted yet still very elegant. I like how aspects of it (within the face and tutu) are fuzzy and faded in. It is not all sharp lines. I think the other piece could use more of this blending. Very nice.
I totally agree with Monet. This piece is really interesting in a sense that you are blurring the image, but at the same time make it descriptive. One thing I have to say about the piece is that the leg in the back is kind of competing with the whole body. So maybe make that leg a little shadier than it is right now.
Eva, this is beautiful! I love how abstracted and dreamlike it is. The value on the face is really nice, as well as all of the organic shapes scattered throughout the tutu. The one thing I might say is maybe add a little more shading on the vertical arm, but really nice job! I like your color scheme, too.
On the other piece you did, it might be good to push the value a little more. The horizontal strokes in the background really make the figure seem as if she is flying forward through space.
I AGREE WITH AMY--> its very dreamlike and the warm browns make it have this soft effect that makes it really movementy! its hard to explain so sorry if that didnt make sense..
i also really like that you payed attention to the background--at least it feels like just as much as the foreground. the horizontal lines makeeee this :)
oh my gosh this is so cool! you can tell exactly what it is even though it is still completely abstract. I like the color scheme of this. It is muted yet still very elegant. I like how aspects of it (within the face and tutu) are fuzzy and faded in. It is not all sharp lines. I think the other piece could use more of this blending. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with Monet. This piece is really interesting in a sense that you are blurring the image, but at the same time make it descriptive. One thing I have to say about the piece is that the leg in the back is kind of competing with the whole body. So maybe make that leg a little shadier than it is right now.
ReplyDeleteEva, this is beautiful! I love how abstracted and dreamlike it is. The value on the face is really nice, as well as all of the organic shapes scattered throughout the tutu. The one thing I might say is maybe add a little more shading on the vertical arm, but really nice job! I like your color scheme, too.
ReplyDeleteOn the other piece you did, it might be good to push the value a little more. The horizontal strokes in the background really make the figure seem as if she is flying forward through space.
I AGREE WITH AMY--> its very dreamlike and the warm browns make it have this soft effect that makes it really movementy! its hard to explain so sorry if that didnt make sense..
ReplyDeletei also really like that you payed attention to the background--at least it feels like just as much as the foreground. the horizontal lines makeeee this :)